"And my inner editor started whispering in my ear in a few places making me want to clean up sentences hear and there for flow and clarity"
Hummm...sounds like it's time to get some wordage flowing!
(Hope mine is one that fits under "Some good pieces" rather than the other -- not that I'd be offended or anything if not. After all, everyone has their own likes, right?)
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"And my inner editor started whispering in my ear in a few places making me want to clean up sentences hear and there for flow and clarity"
Hummm...sounds like it's time to get some wordage flowing!
(Hope mine is one that fits under "Some good pieces" rather than the other -- not that I'd be offended or anything if not. After all, everyone has their own likes, right?)